This is a couplet I have been working on about family dinners, If you have any comments on how I could improve please write a comment! All suggestions are welcome!
A Man, I hate family dinners
A Everyone who eats them are never winners
B Beef, Pork, Chicken, Lamb
B Everyone around better scram
C Terrible, Disgusting and dripping wet
D You would throw up immediately, I'll bet
A All the children surrounding me are grinners
E I sit quietly with a fixed smile
E The smell would make you run a mile
A Man I love family dinners
A Everyone who eats them are always winners
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